Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Mid Rim star

Nominated by: Zed42 ( talk ) 21:51, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Nomination comments: They don&#39;t call it Star Wars for nothing

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Unidentified Mid Rim star

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UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:10, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
Erebus Chronus ^{Open frequency} 13:22, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
Might as well vote; I did comment on this page. SilverSunbird (talk) 00:10, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
TK-462 (talk) 12:28, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:49, October 2, 2020 (UTC)

~~The first two sentences are a bit choppy. Could you potentially combine them since they're both just describing the star itself? TK-462 (talk) 16:12, September 22, 2020 (UTC)~~
- Done. Zed42 (talk) 22:38, September 22, 2020 (UTC)

I wonder why you took off the link to Battle at Rendezvous Point Delta-Three. It sounds like it should logically be linked to in this article. SilverSunbird (talk) 21:54, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
- My bad, I meant to move the link to a different term but it got lost in the rewording. Zed42 (talk) 21:57, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
I've reworded the BTS so that it includes the comic book series. Please let me know if you are satisfied with this change or want it reverted. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:59, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
- That change is fine. Zed42 (talk) 13:05, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
"Tactic she had previously derived" sounds strange. Would "devised" be a better word, or is there something about Zahra's tactic I don't know? SilverSunbird (talk) 22:47, September 22, 2020 (UTC)
- Devised is in fact the word that I meant, thanks for catching that. Zed42 (talk) 00:05, September 23, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:19, October 4, 2020 (UTC)