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Unidentified Kupohan

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni (Conversation) 02:41, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Unidentified witty comment

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Support

1. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:40, 25 November 2020 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 15:06, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:31, 1 December 2020 (UTC)

Object

Braha'tok enthusiast

• Context needed for Luke, Nakari, Sakhet, Sakhet's Noodles.
  • Updated
    • I don't think they have sufficient context yet. Since you contacted me on discord, I think it's best to discuss this there. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:54, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
      • Objection handled via discord. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 17:15, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
• "The Kupohan made no outward sign of the unusual order other than a small twitch of the primary and basal ears." this is from Luke's perspective in the novel, therefore to not make it based on Luke's assumption, you should change it to something like "The Kupohan acknowledged the order with a twitch of the Kupohan's primary and basal ears."
  • Fixed.
• (Reviewing note) note my changes and try to avoid underlinking and the use of this. Also novels don't need their release dates sourced, neither details of when they were announced, that's for the novel's article. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:47, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
  • I see you took out this in a few places and left it in the quote and the reference. Was that an appropriate place to use the word this? JediMasterMacaroni (Conversation) 00:24, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
    • That's me being a melt. I fixed it myself. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:54, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Fan

• The first and second sentences can be combined; it's not necessary to say "during the time of the Galactic Empire" since we have a more concrete date in 0 ABY; right now, the article just repeats itself by saying twice that the Kupohan worked at the restaurant. Furthermore, it doesn't need to say Sakhet "provided such services" since it already tells us Luke is there to acquire intel from him it's easy enough to infer that he does in fact provide intel services.
  • Fixed.
• The date reference requires expansion. "Heir to the Jedi states that Luke Skywalker had not heard from Ben Kenobi since Yavin." Make it clear that this is referring to the Battle, which needs to be placed in 0 BBY. Standard year also needs to be linked to. Fan26 (Talk) 17:06, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
  • I agree. Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni (Conversation) 17:43, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

QGJ

• So, what happened at 0900 the next day? Did some sort of meeting take place there? Was the Kupohan in on the scheme or someone just asked to pass him the note? I think some more context is required (if available, of course). QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 16:30, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
  • That information is available, although the Kupohan is not seen the next day. I can add some more context though. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 17:16, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 19:20, 15 November 2020 (UTC)

Imp

• Since everything in ref note 3 can be derived from simply perusing the Heir to the Jedi novel, the ref is unnecessary and should just be replaced by the standard novel reference. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:07, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Should be fixed now. JediMasterMacaroni(Conversation) 01:53, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
• Please note that the restaurant is located on Denon. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:00, 30 November 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:31, 1 December 2020 (UTC)