Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Jedi Knight (Ganzer)

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Unidentified Jedi Knight (Ganzer)

  • Nominated by: Fan26 (Talk) 19:01, July 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. I really need to go back through Canto Bight again at some point --Lewisr (talk) 03:20, July 24, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:39, August 4, 2020 (UTC)
  3. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 08:50, August 6, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 14:01, August 12, 2020 (UTC)
  5. CIS roundel OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 19:54, August 17, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • Jedi Order appears to be infobox-exclusive. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:24, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
    • Worked into the body in the least awkward way I could see, thanks for catching that. Fan26 (Talk) 02:54, August 3, 2020 (UTC)
OOM
  • "Ganzer, who by then was the bartender of Ganzer's Grotto in the Canto Casino in the city of Canto Bight on the planet Cantonica" Too many locations stuffed into this line. Also, I suggest replacing one of the pronouns here "One gambler fled, while the other played him and lost. He then remarked […]" with "the Jedi" for clarity. - - -CIS roundel OOM 224 ༼༽{talk}༼༽ 11:10, August 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done Fan26 (Talk) 19:47, August 17, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:30, August 18, 2020 (UTC)