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Unidentified Imperial spy (Demiloch)
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 12:23, March 15, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
Support
Fan26 (Talk) 03:04, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 22:24, March 18, 2020 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:52, March 20, 2020 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 01:56, March 21, 2020 (UTC)
Object
UberSoldat
"When the Rebel Alliance's Sixty-First Mobile Infantry held a recruitment drive on the terrestrial world Demiloch, sometime prior to the year 3 ABY, the Imperial spy, posing as a recruit, shot their captain, Micha Evon." This can be reworded to flow better, currently there are too many commas.UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:16, March 16, 2020 (UTC)- Split the sentence. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 20:37, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
Please add that the recruitment drive was cut short due to the spy's actions.Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:43, March 20, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 16:55, March 20, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:56, March 21, 2020 (UTC)