Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Imperial spy (Demiloch)

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified Imperial spy (Demiloch)
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.2 Anil
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified Imperial spy (Demiloch)

  • Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 12:23, March 15, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 03:04, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 22:24, March 18, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:52, March 20, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:56, March 21, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • "When the Rebel Alliance's Sixty-First Mobile Infantry held a recruitment drive on the terrestrial world Demiloch, sometime prior to the year 3 ABY, the Imperial spy, posing as a recruit, shot their captain, Micha Evon." This can be reworded to flow better, currently there are too many commas. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:16, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
    • Split the sentence. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 20:37, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
  • Please add that the recruitment drive was cut short due to the spy's actions. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:43, March 20, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 16:55, March 20, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:56, March 21, 2020 (UTC)