Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Imperial marine biologist

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Unidentified Imperial marine biologist

  • Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 19:48, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
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(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 05:18, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
  2. BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 00:27, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:20, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote The sea was angry that day, my friends Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:50, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
  5. —spookywillowwtalk 00:28, 4 November 2022 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • The page currently has no category that would suit their allegiance to the Empire.
    • Added. - DFaceG (talk) 21:37, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Does the book give any indication as to why the biologist was in the bar?
    • It does not. DFaceG (talk) 21:24, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Any names for the sea creatures in the source? Also, does it call them "sea monsters"?
    • Rephrased. - DFaceG (talk) 21:37, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
  • There is a run-on sentence in the {{RPGseed}}. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 20:20, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
    • "adventure seed" is one term. - DFaceG (talk) 21:25, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
      • If this also refers to not having a comma after "roleplaying game," I believe the implication is that the adventure seed and suggestion are "of" the roleplaying game, not alternatives. - DFaceG (talk) 21:26, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
        • Clarified via Discord, fixed. - DFaceG (talk) 21:37, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Context for Akwin. Sentient species? Creature? Some technology? Who knows until I click the link! :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:54, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:05, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
      • Perfection! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:20, 1 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

The adventure seed says "For an added wrinkle, an Imperial marine biologist..." Do you think we can say that the marine biologist's exploration made the traveler's actions more difficult as they were aligned with the New Republic? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:58, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

  • I think we should refrain; while TTRPGs and the DMs running them can nudge their party to an alignment there's no guarantee the party is aligned with the New Republic. I utilized the same discretion when writing up Lazerian IV as well. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:02, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
  • As soon as I voted support it occurred to me that the article title would be better off as Unidentified marine biologist, seeing as there's no other articles competing for that title Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:54, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Perhaps after the CAN finishes (for comprehension's sake) we can move it - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 08:07, 2 November 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:59, 4 November 2022 (UTC)