Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Hutt crime lord (Great Goblin)

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Unidentified Hutt crime lord (Great Goblin)

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:51, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Made for above nom.

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Maybe change Goblin to Hutt in the BtS though. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:13, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:45, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:57, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
4. Assuming EJ's satisfied. Cade Calrayn 01:22, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:48, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Cadeth

• Please rewrite the way you introduce the Hutt being a hermaphrodite. All Hutts are, so it's not a unique or distinguishing attribute as your article currently uses it.
  • Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:07, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
• Same objection about the Anx.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:07, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
• For here and above, context on Star Wars Gamer 7. Cade Calrayn 17:02, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:07, August 6, 2014 (UTC)

SE

• Can you break up the first sentence of the bio? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:10, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:11, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
• Bit of context on the Guide to Intelligent life. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:42, August 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:31, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• As per Supreme's objection to Great Goblin, you can work out a timeline in the BTS for when he was alive.
  • Added in something to BTS. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:11, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
• As the Gamer article was an in-universe publication, you should say that the Hutt was mentioned in an article by University of Sanbra professor Tem Eliss in the body.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:17, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:11, August 15, 2014 (UTC)
• Can you give an indication of the timeframe in the body of the article. Something like: "At some point before the Battle of Gravlex Med..."
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:44, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
• In the part about the era in the BTS you should mention that the part about the length of time the Goblin's record was stated to have not been broken in the article. Use it to help give an indication of when the Hutt lived.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:35, August 28, 2014 (UTC)
  • I've added that it was three centuries prior to when the article was written, but since we don't know exactly when it was written I don't want to speculate more on what time period that is in. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:44, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
• You are now at 217 words, please section the article.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:51, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 01:54, August 30, 2014 (UTC)
    • You're at 254 words. You will need to take this to the GAN page.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:00, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

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