Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Human Emperor's Voice (3,678 BBY)

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Unidentified Human Emperor's Voice (3678 BBY)

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 19:28, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero. A Voice of the Emperor who has strangely feminine fingers.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Nice.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 21:32, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:24, February 8, 2013 (UTC)
3. Winterz (talk) 14:15, February 13, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Is not "emotionless" POV? Other than that, awesome.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 20:17, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
   • Nah, the Codex itself uses that exact word. Cade Calrayn 21:02, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
     • Cool.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 21:32, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
2. Could you explain the double meaning you mention in the quote attribution? 501st dogma^(talk) 00:25, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
   • Actually, I removed that, since it's pretty much speculation. I had some weird idea that his using the word "voice" was important, but the quote itself can stay. Cade Calrayn 05:46, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
3. You should probably add in the first sentence of the Bts something like "The Human thought to be the Sith Emperor's real face/body" or within those lines, as the remark you make on the section never specified it, only that the Human and (in different lines) the Emperor's face first appeared in the comic and that the novel then contradicted the Emperor's appearance. Winterz (talk) 14:57, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
   • Done. Cade Calrayn 16:06, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
4. Where in the galaxy is he when he issues the command to Teneb Kel? Menkooroo (talk) 05:47, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
   • Arglebargle. Added intro as well. Cade Calrayn 17:16, February 11, 2013 (UTC)
     • Anything more specific? A city, a building? The aim should be to give an appropriate amount of detail rather than just enough to keep it under 250 words. Menkooroo (talk) 12:03, February 12, 2013 (UTC)
5. Are you sure he dies? Ref [2], which is the ref for him dying, doesn't say anything to support that assertion. Menkooroo (talk) 12:03, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

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