Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Emperor's Voice (Human female)

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Unidentified Emperor's Voice (Human female)

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 01:38, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A long name for a short article.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:44, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:36, December 23, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ECvote—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:04, December 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. Exiled Jedi
    • It seems to me that since the article is about the woman, that the first sentence should establish her as a Human female living at whatever time, and then move on to the part about her being the Emperor's Voice.
      • Done.
    • The second sentence seems to conflict with the BTS, since the BTS says she could have died naturally, while the sentence states that she died when the Emperor changed voices.
      • Done.
    • You need to link the Sith Empire somewhere in the body.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 02:17, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

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