Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Chiss

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Unidentified Chiss

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 13:11, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: grandpa
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss WP:Novels

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 18:07, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 00:14, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:51, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
4. Loqiical (talk) 23:52, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
5. Samonic ^(Talk) 22:10, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
6. Manoof (he/him/his) 15:41, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• Is there a reason given in the novel as to why Zinda remembered this quote before her rematching?
  • added
• Can you specify the language the quote was said in in the attribs and body?
• The Chiss has dialogue, so would that count as an appearance? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:47, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
  • not in this case. its a bit strange, i can provide reasoning on discord if you'd like but its definetely a mention and not an appearance. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:12, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

Manoof

• "While contemplating rematching to the ruling Irizi family..." can this be elaborated, what does it mean? Does this relate to mawwiage? Adoption? Allegiance? I did a tweak as well to get rid of the other "contemplating" but feel free to rephrase it if you like! Manoof (he/him/his) 10:24, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
  • reworded, lmk if it works BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:47, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

Samonic

• Where does Greater Good say that Ziinda was a child/young when she interacted with the old Chiss? Also, Oyokal is a terrestrial astronomical object, not a planet. Samonic ^(Talk) 13:07, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
  • removed and reworded BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:47, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Is it clearer to get rid of the link to Chiss family? Given the other two families in the article, it might seem that "Chiss family" is the name of a third family when it's not. Loqiical (talk) 00:18, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
  • nah, we always link it like yhat
• Is picking himself off the ground idiomatic or literal? If it's literal, I think we can just say that he stood up. Loqiical (talk) 00:18, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
  • sure, reworded BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:31, 4 January 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:42, 8 January 2023 (UTC)