Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Chagrian patron

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Unidentified Chagrian patron

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 22:04, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
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(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:53, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
2. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:02, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:58, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
4. DFaceG (talk) 21:36, 19 March 2022 (UTC)
5. Please check my edit. Thanks. Loqiical (talk) 06:09, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• The disambiguation page Unidentified Chagrian should be linked. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:14, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Added.—spookywilloww^talk 18:38, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• "While there, he became drunk and attempted to retain the attentions of the cantina's hostess Selbie to get together with her." retain means he had the attention of Selbie already, is this correct? And can this be rephrased this to something like "While in the cantina, he became intoxicated and attempted to retain the attention of the cantina's hostess Selbie, in an attempt to spend time with her" Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:00, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Reworded similar to the suggestion.—spookywilloww^talk 18:41, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
• We don't need the mediacat there given there is only one file per Wookieepedia:Layout_Guide#Mediacat Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:00, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed.—spookywilloww^talk 18:41, 12 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:06, 20 March 2022 (UTC)