Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ulicia (second nomination)

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Ulicia

  • Nominated by: TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:07, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My very first Legends nomination, should be fun. Also, the article's probation entry can be found here.

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  • Please pay attention to how the title of the Galaxy Magazine issue is formatted. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • The Online Companion is a source for the Ulicia system, not the planet itself. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • The Corporate Sector map provides more information on what worlds Ulicia was connected to via hyperlanes. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • Please note any named hyperlanes Ulicia is on in the infobox. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • There's a problem with using just the CSA category. Besides the planets in the Corporate Sector, it also includes Nyriaan, which was located in the Mid Rim. I think you should create a separate Corporate Sector planets category. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • "Situated in the Corporate Sector, it fell under the rule of the Corporate Sector Authority, which had struggled to develop there." — this reads like the CSA had struggled to develop in the Corporate Sector. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • Can you split up the single sentence of the second paragraph? Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • The Atlas entry for Atchorb also mentions Ulicia, and I believe it contains info that can be added here. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • The lead sentence of the article should be slightly shorter, with additional astrographical info provided in following sentences. Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • Just want to confirm: can you tell me on which page does the Atlas say the Corporate Sector was located in the Tingel Arm? Imperators II(Talk) 09:46, January 21, 2019 (UTC)
    • Changed the reference with The New Essential Chronology p. 30. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:02, January 24, 2019 (UTC)
      • To my knowledge, the NEC doesn't specify that the Tingel Arm is a region of the Outer Rim Territories. It could just as well coincide with the Wild Space, or overlap both of those regions. Please reword the article accordingly, and add Tingel Arm to the infobox. Imperators II(Talk) 14:31, January 24, 2019 (UTC)
  • In addition, the Corporate Sector is a part of the Trans-Hydian, so that should be added, as well. See Atchorb for example. Imperators II(Talk) 14:31, January 24, 2019 (UTC)

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