Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tycho

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Tycho

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:02, May 29, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Mopping up those small one-mention-articles

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Menkooroo 04:45, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
2. —Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 10:19, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
3. ~Savage 22:00, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Whie?
   • Can you give a bit of context on the Battle of Honoghr (ie, mention that it was a Clone Wars battle and maybe a little more)?
     • Now fine?
   • Can you say what Whie's result was?
     • Nope.
   • Any quotes? Menkooroo 16:03, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
     • Nope. Thanks for the reviw. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:24, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
2. Axinal
   • Would it be proper to link "younger" to youngling?
     • I think not, because we only know that he taught Padawans and not the iniates.
       • I see, makes sense.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 10:19, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
   • I believe, but I'm not sure, that since the Jedi Order was part of the Galactic Republic, that the Republic should be listed first in the infobox, and Jedi Order should be indented to reflect the hierarchy.—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 00:03, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
     • Agreed. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:51, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
       • Nice work!—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 10:19, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
3. Bob
   • Context would be good or "Padawans" since you use the term kind of abruptly.
     • Now better ?
   • Perhaps "what mistake" rather than "which mistake" would be better, unless the OS seems to imply that it was a multiple-choice question. Any idea?
     • Seems to be a multiple-choice question.
   • Can you change some of the wording so you don't repeat the word "battle" so much?
     • Varied.
   • "with Whie Malreaux's result." Should this be "Malreaux's answer"? It sounds like he asked a question, didn't give them a test. Sorry if I'm coming off as nitpicky; I would have SOFIXIT'ed these, but I was unsure about the context so thought I'd ask. ~Savage 05:18, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
     • I think you're right. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 16:30, June 7, 2011 (UTC)