Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Twenty-First

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Twenty-First

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:32, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:09, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 14:44, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
3. Zed42 (talk) 23:33, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
4. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:58, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 04:06, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
6. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:56, April 17, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• It is better to say the group "was deployed to Bestine during the Retreat." UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:28, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • How does this look? Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 10:39, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • Good enough. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:41, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
• I believe there's enough info for an article on the Bestine conflict. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:35, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 11:02, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • Now you can add this to the infobox as well. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:05, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 11:08, April 13, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• If "coordinated effort to distract the forces of the Galactic Empire, allowing the Alliance Fleet to finish withdrawing from the Mid Rim" describes the entire Mid Rim Retreat, it should be moved directly after the first mention of the event to provide context. Zed42 (talk) 20:43, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
  • In the novel, it's described as a final effort as the Mid Rim retreat had been going on for several months by that point. Added 'final' in there to specify. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:50, April 14, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:56, April 17, 2020 (UTC)