Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Turl Nevil

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Turl Nevil

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Support

  1. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 02:19, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR (Talk) 09:13, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. Dentface (talk) 16:41, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote OOM 224 18:39, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:10, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • Add unabridged audiobook and investigate abridged version.
  • What's the mention in Revelation?
    • Is it worth mentioning what was said about him after his death, kind of like what GT has done here?
      • I don't think so, one was just Niathal saying sorry, and the other was just her thinking about the losses the Galactic Alliance had suffered. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 02:12, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Is his full name beyond just Turl mentioned in Fury? If not, Revelation or the CSWE would need {{1stID|Nevil}}. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 04:04, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
    • All done. Revelations is just two single word mentions of his death. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 23:57, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Bts needs to mention where the last name was first given. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 00:34, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
LucaRoR
  • "Galactic Federation of Free Alliances" is inbox only. LucaRoR (Talk) 11:51, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
    • I've thrown in a link, imo though saying he served in the Galactic Alliance Second fleet is enough to say he served the Galactic Alliance though. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 02:47, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Layout Guide: "Organizations in any character infobox that are inherently implied by a stated role (examples: Stormtrooper Corps does not need to be linked within a character article body if the article states that the character is a stormtrooper; Imperial Officer Corps does not need to be linked in the article body if the article states that the subject is an Imperial officer)." UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:21, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
OOM
  • (My copy-edit: I added the deep-space part per the Hoclaw precedent.)
    • Hmm, I had that in at the time of nom, looks like J-Mac removed it. I'll follow up with him about it.
  • I think it's worth mentioning the lead quote here plus the lead quote on Kral Nevil in the article body—the effects of Turl's death seems to be quite significant to Kral and later events OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 09:31, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Yeah, I could throw in a quick sentence about his death being one of the catalysts that led to Kral defecting. I'll take a deeper look at that event tomorrow. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 04:10, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
      • I'll be off for a week, so SE or any other EC have my permission to strike this objection once it's been addressed. OOM 224 22:21, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Done and added, per your permission here I'll strike it. Enjoy the break. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 02:28, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Please implement {{CSWECite}} for Ref 4.
    • Done.
  • The full name in the body should be referenced to the source that actually provides it.
    • Done
  • Introduce Star Wars: Legacy of the Force in the BTS. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:08, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Left you a message on Discord about this. Thanks for the review. Supreme Emperor Holocomm 02:53, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Addressed this myself since it's the only outstanding issue, and a pretty minor one at that. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:04, 6 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:11, 6 August 2021 (UTC)