- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Troiken indictidile
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:18, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The eye looks orange to me, but if anyone thinks otherwise I'm happy to change it.
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Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 13:20, September 17, 2014 (UTC)- Pretty rough for an article so short. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:23, October 1, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:17, October 6, 2014 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:29, October 11, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Firstly, {{CAnom}}.- My bad, forgot to click save page to add it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:28, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Secondly, that's not how you write or refer to The Jedi Path. It's an IU text that should be referred to by its full name and italicized, not in quotation marks. Cade Calrayn 00:25, September 10, 2014 (UTC)- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:28, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
How does the source state that it is non-sentient? Cade Calrayn 19:40, September 15, 2014 (UTC)- The section starts with a bit saying that there are many animals that Jedi may encounter and gives a description suggesting non sentience, although it does say that the distinction between sentience and non-sentience is not as clear as most think. The indictile is then listed as an animal that the Jedi had encountered. I generally term animal to mean non-sentient but I'm happy to remove sentience from the article and put it in the unknown sentience category if you'd prefer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:34, September 17, 2014 (UTC)
Master of the universe
Two quick things: Maybe add "rolls into ball" into the infobox distinction field. Also, for contextual reasons, maybe add that Bowspritz was a biologist?Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 01:36, September 16, 2014 (UTC)
- Both done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:24, September 17, 2014 (UTC)
SE
As you have it, it sounds like it waited for its prey, but the quote makes it sound like it rolled in the undergrowth to find it's prey. Can you reword?Supreme Emperor (talk) 17:44, September 26, 2014 (UTC)- I'm not sure what suggested it waited, but I've added a bit which might of fixed it? Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:11, September 26, 2014 (UTC)
- Can you reword that whole sentence? As is, you use the word rolled a number of times. Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:54, September 30, 2014 (UTC)
- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:03, October 1, 2014 (UTC)
- Can you reword that whole sentence? As is, you use the word rolled a number of times. Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:54, September 30, 2014 (UTC)
- I'm not sure what suggested it waited, but I've added a bit which might of fixed it? Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:11, September 26, 2014 (UTC)
Can you reword the start of the fourth sentence? As is, it sounds like you refer to a Jedi master as well as a biologist.Supreme Emperor (talk) 12:31, October 1, 2014 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:02, October 1, 2014 (UTC)