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Tredo Dopra
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:29, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
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- —spookywillowwtalk 03:08, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:24, 21 March 2022 (UTC)- Erebus Chronus (Talk) 23:42, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- VergenceScatter (talk) 00:34, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 01:16, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:54, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
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Amazingly
The formatting of this article should reflect this section of the Layout Guide.AmazinglyCool
(talk) 13:57, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- below 165 words. No sectioning. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:03, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- I am not referring to the sectioning. I am stating that it should still follow the format. For example, information about a character's skills are still to be placed after information about the character's personality. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:09, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:04, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- I am not referring to the sectioning. I am stating that it should still follow the format. For example, information about a character's skills are still to be placed after information about the character's personality. AmazinglyCool
- below 165 words. No sectioning. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:03, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
Spooky
Something minor that I might be misunderstanding, but... "...seeing exotic locations that beggared the imagination." Does the source use "beggared" or something meaning similar, as it seems to refer to reducing someone to poverty. Caught my eye, wanted to check in and see what the source had referred to it as, but it seemed to not fit in this context compared to something like "astounded".—spookywillowwtalk 00:04, 18 March 2022 (UTC)- Yes, source does somehow say beggared. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:30, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
- Mb then, very peculiar choice of wording on their part.—spookywillowwtalk 03:08, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
- Yes, source does somehow say beggared. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:30, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
Vergence
Please add context for the galactic civil war.VergenceScatter (talk) 06:24, 21 March 2022 (UTC)- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 12:31, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
Fan
"by some time in" Just saying "during" is much less wordy here.Fan26 (Talk) 21:43, 21 March 2022 (UTC)- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:29, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:54, 28 March 2022 (UTC)