Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Trandosha

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Trandosha

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:11, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Just look in the coding to see why writing this thing was a pain in the butt.

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Imperators II
  • Currently the fact that Trandosha orbits a single star is sourced to Journey Through Space, however, that source is not listed under "Sources". Either it should be listed there, or you should explain in a reference note how that information follows from that source.
    • If you look in the coding, you can see that I've made hidden notes through the the entire article. If you'd like, I can turn these all into notes visible in the Notes and references section. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 15:09, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
      • I have nothing against comments in the code, but is the reader, not the editor, likely to see them? I don't see why those notes shouldn't be made into reference notes, they would make everything just so much more precise and trustworthy. And the code would be a bit lighter, as well, I think, without having to fully repeat every note in every instance.
        • Done. I'll try and get this one taken down so I can move it to a GA nom. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 16:20, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
  • "Trandoshans from this world included the [..]" — from which world? Trandosha or Wasskah? Please reword to avoid confusion. Imperators II(Talk) 10:10, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
    • Used Dosha to prevent undesirable alliteration. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 15:05, January 14, 2016 (UTC)
  • Hmmm... could you add the fact that Trandosha appeared greenish from space and had some clouds visible? And then maybe the article will be GA-length. Imperators II(Talk) 10:16, January 14, 2016 (UTC)

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