- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Touler
- Nominated by: Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 02:19, July 7, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments:Takin' a break from Deceived to do a single mention from TFU2.
(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
- Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
Menkooroo 14:12, July 8, 2011 (UTC)- Looks good.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 15:37, July 12, 2011 (UTC) - NaruHina Talk
02:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC) - ~Savage 20:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
Object
- Hey, I wanted to take him :P
First, the infobox needs to be the Imperial character infobox.- Fixed.
Then you have to hide the biographical part.- Done.
What source say that Touler is a Human Male? The only mention of him is the quote and there is no other source which says that.- Oops, got a little ahead of myself there.
The info about him could use some context on Vader, Kamino and the events of the battle (stationed over Kamino, battled the Rebels, Imperials loose at the end).- How's that?
- Please remember to check all those things mentioned above before you nominate an article. But nice work anyway. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
- Yea, normally I wouldn't let such big mistakes get through, but I just wasn't paying attention. Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 18:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
- Yea, normally I wouldn't let such big mistakes get through, but I just wasn't paying attention. Cal Jedi
Source for 1 BBY?NaruHina Talk 06:15, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 00:58, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. Cal Jedi
- Post-support objection
A fan-made timeline can't be used as a source. And 3 BBY can't be correct, if TFU I is in 2 BBY. Do you have any recent novels that include a novel timeline in the front?Menkooroo 03:52, July 18, 2011 (UTC)- Check this. If this works, I'll have to change it on my other TFUII noms. Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 04:27, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
- It can't be 3 BBY if it takes place after TFU I (2 BBY). Try to find an official source --- the front of a recent novel, Leland Chee on facebook/twitter, etc. Menkooroo 04:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
- Just saw the SH thread: the quote from the Gamepro magazine here states 'This game is several months after the first game." So by "about a year before," it means "about a year before ANH," not "about a year before TFU." Ta-da! 1 BBY. :) Menkooroo 05:06, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
- Aahhh, what a forgetful person I am. :) Changed to 1 BBY. Does that source format look OK? Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 16:24, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
- Like with Lexi Dio above, it's probably best to go with the comic. Menkooroo 14:15, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 17:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed. Cal Jedi
- Like with Lexi Dio above, it's probably best to go with the comic. Menkooroo 14:15, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Aahhh, what a forgetful person I am. :) Changed to 1 BBY. Does that source format look OK? Cal Jedi
- Just saw the SH thread: the quote from the Gamepro magazine here states 'This game is several months after the first game." So by "about a year before," it means "about a year before ANH," not "about a year before TFU." Ta-da! 1 BBY. :) Menkooroo 05:06, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
- It can't be 3 BBY if it takes place after TFU I (2 BBY). Try to find an official source --- the front of a recent novel, Leland Chee on facebook/twitter, etc. Menkooroo 04:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
- Check this. If this works, I'll have to change it on my other TFUII noms. Cal Jedi
- Bob
Perhaps add the line above Vader's line in the introductory quote to give some context for what Vader is responding to.- Fixed.
You should probably create an Unidentified signals officer when that guy gets mentioned.- Got it.
Similarly, in the body, what event prompted Vader to order the battle to begin? ~Savage 13:47, July 21, 2011 (UTC)- Got it. Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 17:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Got it. Cal Jedi
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