Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tostonian

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Tostonian

• Nominated by: Samonic 12:40, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Kenobi nom
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:ALIENS

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Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:11, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:08, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:57, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead

• Since this is a species article it should use the full body shot of the alien when it's standing in the doorway rather then a closeup on just it's head. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
  • The best image I can get is not very good, as the source doesn't allow me to get a decent shot. Samonic 20:42, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
• You can go into quite a lot more detail about appearance, e.g. number of eyes, fingers, etc. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
  • You can see from the wider shots that they have only three fingers, not atleast three. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:44, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
    • I did not notice, sorry. It has been fixed. Samonic 07:43, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
• I don't really see the benefit of saying they resided within the galaxy. All of the locational data we have is that one worked on Daiyu, which is covered later in the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
• Audio description specifies that the alien is male so you can include that to show the species can have that gender. Remember that audio description requires a separate reference. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
• Where are you getting fish like from? It's not in audio description or subtitles. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
• I think it's worth covering its clothing and mentioning that Kenobi followed the Tostonian and acquired its clothes (specified in audio description), which nicely demonstrates that what it wore could also be worn by humans. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
  • The audio description only says he acquired them so we can't assume he stole them. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:44, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Changed. Samonic 07:43, 21 July 2022 (UTC)
• You should mention that its speaking an alien language. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:44, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
  • All should be done but the image, which I can't get as I'm editing from ny phone. This insight is definitely useful for my future Kilji FAN, so thank you! Samonic 15:53, 13 July 2022 (UTC)

Imp

• Does the episode actually describe the Tostonian's language as an "alien" one? If not, I suggest referring to it as a non-Basic one instead. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:10, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
  • It does indeed. Samonic 09:40, 24 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Speciesists, speciesists everywhere... :P Imperators II^(Talk) 09:57, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:58, 24 July 2022 (UTC)