Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Three-eyed Kinyenian potato

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Three-eyed Kinyenian potato

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:03, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A return to Dex's

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:05, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
2. Unless context is needed for potato. Commander Code-8 ^{Felicitations malefactors!} 12:12, April 17, 2014 (UTC)
3. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:34, April 20, 2014 (UTC)
4. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 20:50, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
5. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:55, April 22, 2014 (UTC)
6. Please go through the rest of your Dex's Diner articles and make them adhere to these objections. Cade Calrayn 16:35, May 1, 2014 (UTC)

Object

501

• "The Besalisk chef and owner of the diner, Dexter Jettster, served the salad, including the potatoes, as a lunch and charged..." Kinda awkward with all of the commas, so kill some please.
• 501st dogma^(talk) 23:45, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
  • De-commafied. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Cadeth

• This goes for all of your nominations—please slow down. When you have this many objections consistently on all of your nominations, you cannot batch-nominate them.
• How exactly is it "found on" Coruscant? That's speculation.
  • I added it since it's used there, but removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• The very name of the potato — Kinyenian — means that the potato is from Kinyen. "Kinyenian" is a relational adjective.
  • Changed to reflect this. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• I don't see why Dex's Diner is listed in the affiliation. Just because it's used in a dish there doesn't mean it's affiliated with the restaurant.
  • Removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• Please give context on Star Wars Hyperspace.
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• "The article does not state any connection between the potatoes and the plant besides the vegetable's name." - this is moot now thanks to my previous objection, but I'm pointing it out anyway. Please slow down and proofread.
  • Removed that part of the bts like you said. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• Dining at Dex's is italicized in the BTS, but you don't italicize it in the Sources section. Please find the correct formatting and use it for all of your articles.
  • It's italicised in both? Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
• I find it rather speculatory that you're saying he sold the salad up until the diner's destruction. What's your evidence for this? If you don't have any specific evidence, then you can only say that he sold it at one point. Cade Calrayn 03:46, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
  • Changed to say it was served at one point. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:20, April 23, 2014 (UTC)
    • I've removed the part about the destruction. It's unnecessary. Cade Calrayn 16:35, May 1, 2014 (UTC)

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