Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Thongla Jur

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Thongla Jur

• Nominated by: -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 21:19, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My first foray into this.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Nooice QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:02, October 6, 2019 (UTC)
2. Welcome to the CAN! Fan26 (Talk) 14:09, October 6, 2019 (UTC)
3. Zed42 (talk) 21:42, October 8, 2019 (UTC)
4. User:Spookywilloww/Sig2 00:53, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
5. Congrats on your first nomination! Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:30, October 10, 2019 (UTC)

Object

QGJ

• Can you provide a date (at least approximate) for the events of the episode?
  • I used the date for the Mission to Aut-O's flagship, which is sourced from Galactic Atlas. I'm not sure if that is enough, since I don't have the book. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 21:51, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
• Some context is needed for D-Squad and Aayla Secura.
  • Done. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 21:51, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
• Please fix the redirect in the Bts. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 21:42, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
  • Done. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 21:51, October 5, 2019 (UTC)

Fan

• The page is missing backup link(s). Fan26 (Talk) 22:46, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
  • Fixed. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 23:06, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
• Galactic Atlas most likely does not say directly that Jur was present in the Jedi war room in 20 BBY, so the date ref needs elaboration. Fan26 (Talk) 23:11, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
  • I've clarified it as best I could based on the info from Galactic Atlas. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 23:35, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
    • I'm thinking the body should now say "between 20 bby and 19 bby" or similar. Fan26 (Talk) 23:37, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
      • I've reworded it. I think "transition" would be a good word for a broad time. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 23:40, October 5, 2019 (UTC)
        • The general precedent is to go with "between such and such years" with this sort of situation. Fan26 (Talk) 00:08, October 6, 2019 (UTC)
          • Didn't know that. I've changed it to that. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 00:09, October 6, 2019 (UTC)
• I think Gascon should be identified as a Republic colonel. Fan26 (Talk) 00:49, October 6, 2019 (UTC)
  • That might not be necessary since it was mentioned that D-Squad was Republic Military, but I've added that anyway. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 00:52, October 6, 2019 (UTC)

Zed

• As there is an image category, it can be added to the page via {{Imagecat}}. Zed42 (talk) 11:37, October 7, 2019 (UTC)
  • Added. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 18:59, October 7, 2019 (UTC)

Imp

• Welcome to the CAN! Imperators II^(Talk) 08:28, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
  • Thank you. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 13:18, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
• I'm not seeing where in the episode guide is the release date provided. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:28, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
  • Changed it to a source that does. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 13:18, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Anil

• Per precedent, as the character's actual first appearance isn't in Legends, you don't need to specify that TCW was the character's first "canon" appearance in BTS.
  • Changed. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 22:18, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
• "The events of 'Secret Weapons' take place chronologically between those two events." In this reference note, you need to explain how we know that by using Star Wars: The Clone Wars Chronological Episode Order on StarWars.com (backup link).
  • I've added that extra context. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 22:18, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
• Isn't it fair to assume that he is affiliated with the Galactic Republic? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:57, October 9, 2019 (UTC)
  • It would be. Added. -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 22:18, October 9, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:20, October 12, 2019 (UTC)