Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Thirty-Second Infantry

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  • 1 Thirty-Second Infantry
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Editor
        • 1.1.2.2 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.3 Zed
        • 1.1.2.4 Fan
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Thirty-Second Infantry

  • Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:32, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 14:40, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:13, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Zed42 (talk) 23:31, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
  4. Good work--Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:32, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 04:00, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
  6. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:40, April 17, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Editor
  • The infobox says its a company, but the article says its a battle group.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:34, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Behind the Scenes needs to be sourced.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:34, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • Do you need "Sometime" in the line "Sometime by 3 ABY?" I feel like it flows better if you remove that word.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:34, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 13:48, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • Their "Strength" should be mentioned in the body, in the first sentence preferably. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 14:02, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 14:56, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • I think the last sentence should be reworded so that it doesn't include a direct quote. Zed42 (talk) 20:39, April 13, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:46, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
Fan
  • I don't think the infobox can really say 405 rebel troopers; all we know is that it was at least 405 strong. Fan26 (Talk) 20:28, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:46, April 15, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:40, April 17, 2020 (UTC)