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Third Brother
- Nominated by: NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 00:33, 20 January 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I am BEYOND excited to regret this nomination.
- Date Archived: 00:33, 22 January 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 142 words (0 introduction, 109 body, 33 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 144 words (0 introduction, 109 body, 35 behind the scenes)
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Support
CometSmudge (talk) 19:22, 20 January 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 05:47, 21 January 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 20:50, 21 January 2025 (UTC)
Object
Comet
Since it's an IU book, the mention in Rise and Fall can be used as a quoteCometSmudge (talk) 18:19, 20 January 2025 (UTC)- Silly mistake, fixed. NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 18:40, 20 January 2025 (UTC)
- Silly mistake, fixed. NBDani
Comments
- The section that mentions Third Brother is written almost entirely OOU imo. It says "There are some other activities and details of some Inquisitors that were never clearly known." [...] "For example, no one knows about the actions or fate of the Third Brother or Sister" (Published before Reva Sevander appeared in Kenobi). It also says "Likewise, little is known of other members without assigned number, such as the red-skinned alien and the Twi'lek who were sacrificed by Vader." about Thirteenth Sister, who has an assigned number. These feel more like "We, the reader, know nothing about these individuals." So I didn't include a "Their fate is unknown." in the article, cause that's kind a blanket statement to -most- of our articles. If there was a group or person I could attribute that fact to, sure. But I'm willing to here other opinions. NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 00:41, 20 January 2025 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:33, 22 January 2025 (UTC)