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Third Battle of Aefao
- Nominated by: Fan26 (Talk) 22:58, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I was just talking with Dani about future noms which made me realise Aefao could be a future GAN. And that page does need work so hmm... Fan26 (Talk) 22:58, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 23:45, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 96 words (0 introduction, 71 body, 25 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 96 words (0 introduction, 71 body, 25 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:Warfare, WP:MD
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Lewisr (talk) 01:44, 22 April 2024 (UTC)- Go for it. UberSoldat93
(talk) 08:06, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Sanathestarr (talk) 08:30, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:07, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 20:26, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
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Comments
- From page 92 of The Essential Guide to Warfare: "Occasionally, tactical droids refused to take no for an answer. The Third Battle of Aefao...when the Chevin Major Room Garaf was executed by his tactical droid." Warfare doesn't outright say "Garaf and his droid had a disagreement and that was why the droid killed him" but Garaf being listed as an example of a commander killed by his tactical droid because of the droids' interpersonal issues, right on the heels of a paragraph describing how the droids didn't work well with organic commanders, means I consider it not an assumption but implicitly stated information that Garaf's execution was the result of him and his droid disagreeing. Fan26 (Talk) 22:58, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Not an objection or anything, but I'd personally recommend squeezing the Corosi sector somewhere in the prose so it's not exclusive to the categories.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:07, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:43, 23 April 2024 (UTC)