Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Thakaras

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Thakaras

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 17:26, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Codex SubProject: Encyclopedia
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:49, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 19:55, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:20, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote OOM 224 22:36, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
  5. Wish something confirmed that this guy was in the Mitth family. VergenceScatter (talk) 22:40, 29 December 2021 (UTC)

Object

Erebus
  • Can the fact that all Chiss shared blue skin and red eyes be sourced to the Encyclopedia? Does the source in fact say that Thakaras had blue skin and red eyes, though?
    • It has an entire infobox section about Chiss, in which it states that all Chiss have red eyes and blue skin.
  • The order of the physical traits is inconsistent between the infobox and body.
    • What do you mean? We're never required to list those traits in a specific order.
  • Please remove "first" from the BTS. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 23:17, 6 December 2021 (UTC)
Luca
  • I'm not a fan of how you go from biography to P&T and then back to biography.
    • There's not really another way to put it, it needs to be mentioned and the stuff about serving the Empire is necessary at the forefront because it's temporal context.
  • I would mention the videogame The Old Republic in the BTS.
    • That's... not entirely necessary, as the Encyclopedia is a separate product and not an expansion of the game, but okay. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 17:53, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Uh, yeah it probably wasn't necessary, but I think it is good to mention it. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 19:55, 19 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Make sure to be ok with this copy-edit. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 14:54, 11 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:51, 29 December 2021 (UTC)