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Terrin Sandafar
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- 501st dogma(talk) 16:01, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi 
(Greetings) 13:49, September 19, 2012 (UTC)- Tinwe(comlink) 08:41, September 24, 2012 (UTC)
- Winterz (talk) 12:21, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
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- 501st
You use "When the Senator's husband learned" twice after one another. Reword.- Done.
"former Rodian smuggler Shafu" This guy's a former Rodian? Also, I though he was a former slaver, not a smuggler.- Done.
Link and context for Nar Shaada.501st dogma(talk) 23:44, August 23, 2012 (UTC)Is Zallow alive at this time? The Husband's article idicates Zallow's dead, while this one portrays him as alive. Which is true?501st dogma(talk) 00:15, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
Since there is an article for Alderaanian, I believe that at some piint you should link to that article.- Done.
You should also make a clear connection that she was from the planet Alderaan.- Done.
Please source the year using the Erickson post with the additional information.- Done.
So, who was the employer that killed her? If it was the Senator's husband, please mention it in his article. If it was another unnamed character, then you will need to create a new article.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 14:13, September 7, 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah, it was. Added Cade Calrayn 16:41, September 10, 2012 (UTC)
For an article on a character, I believe you should present information in the order it happened. Therefore, I believe that you should mention her death before the part about the Hero of Tython.- Done.
Also, could you add the fact that Sydia's husband killed Sandafar in the husband's article? It's already a CA and it does not mention this.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 00:21, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah, it was. Added Cade Calrayn
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