Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tee-Six (Candor)

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Tee-Six (Candor)

  • Nominated by: LucaRoR (Talk) 14:14, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Thanks to OOM 224 for his quick review before the nomination.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Dentface (talk) 16:12, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:30, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
  3. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 03:53, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:58, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
  5. Looks good to me. -- YakovChaimTzvi ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 17:21, 2 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • You're in the astromech category, which is either speculation or needs to be mentioned in the body and infobox. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 02:23, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
    • I forgot to remove it yesterday when I saw it, I've removed the category now. LucaRoR (Talk) 08:34, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
  • The article for The Bridge provides a rough timeframe that I think should be included here.
  • The Attack on the Candor can be linked. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:28, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
  • The comic shows Tee-Six mounted to the wall from what I can tell, that can be mentioned.
  • You currently only use Tee-Six's name once in the body, you should replace a few instances of "the droid" with the name. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 08:47, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Dent
  • In my opinion, it might be good to re-order the information in your introductory sentence. Pausing with a comma to mention the time period, and then resuming with more information seems a bit awkward. I might mention the dating at the very end of the sentence rather in the middle. If a more experienced reviewer thinks it is good as-is, I would defer to them as I am new at the reviewing process. Dentface (talk) 15:36, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Is that what you were looking for? LucaRoR (Talk) 15:55, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Yes! Additionally, your descriptor of the introductory quote... "Amilyn Hondo to her droid" implies that Holdo owns Tee-Six. Does anything in the comic actually demonstrate that? If yes, the body should be changed to reflect that. If no, I'd change "to her droid" to just "to Tee-Six." Dentface (talk) 16:00, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Changed to Tee-Six because it isn't sure. LucaRoR (Talk) 16:08, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
Erebus
  • Since there is no other appearances or mentions of the character, you can remove "first" from the BTS. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 15:51, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • On the Front Lines' does not provide BBY dates; date note needs more elaboration.
  • Infobox image needs to fit the infobox width. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:50, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Looking at the quote, don't you think there's a detail there to be documented in this article? Tee-Six's work leaving a certain impression on Holdo. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:56, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Is this what you were looking for? LucaRoR (Talk) 09:36, 2 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:53, 2 August 2021 (UTC)