Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Team Four

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Team Four

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (talk) 17:48, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:22, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
2. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 08:27, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:27, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
4. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:43, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
5. Now let's see a Team Four vs. Team Three cage match! Immi Thrax (talk) 02:36, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• Infobox says their headquarters was the factory, but the body just says they patrolled there. Please clarify. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:36, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
  • I'll have the same objection for Team Three btw. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:43, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
    • Good catch. Changed both to Mokivj instead, as they patrolled both the factory and mine. Erebus Chronus (talk) 18:58, 21 February 2021 (UTC)

Editor

• Missing quote
  • Added. Erebus Chronus (talk) 00:56, 22 February 2021 (UTC)
• Include what they are tasked with doing--Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:22, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
  • How's that? Erebus Chronus (talk) 16:22, 22 February 2021 (UTC)
• I think you should note that Skywalker assumed a group of B1s was Team Four. Do not say Team Four was made up of B1s, but Skywalker's speculation can be mentioned in that last paragraph--Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:24, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Does that look fine? Erebus Chronus (talk) 15:56, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
• Thrawn and R2-D2 were also with Anakin on the ship so they should be added. Note that Chaos Rising establishes that Thrawn is really a Senior Captain during this time
• If Thrawn and R2 are added, change Padme's context to "Skywalker's wife, Senator Padmé Amidala, on..."--Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:13, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Both done. Erebus Chronus (talk) 16:32, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
• Should be first mentioned not first appearance as we cannot confirm they actually appear--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:59, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Changed. Erebus Chronus (talk) 23:08, 27 February 2021 (UTC)

Vitus

• I believe it would be more appropriate to list squad in the formation parameter, since a squad is a type of formation. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:10, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Moved. Thanks! Erebus Chronus (talk) 03:14, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Could use some context for Duke Solha. Same for the other nom too. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 07:59, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Is that what you had in mind? Erebus Chronus (talk) 05:05, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
    • Yup, that's perfect. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 08:27, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:03, 18 March 2021 (UTC)