Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tam (clone)

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Tam (clone)

Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:13, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Mopping up those one mention clone commandos

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:22, November 9, 2011 (UTC)
—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 21:51, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:36, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Object

~~Same objections from your other clone.~~--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:30, November 8, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:28, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

Jang
- I hardly ever review on the CAN, but Lee, after taking a look at your nominations, you should know better.
  - Huh? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
- ~~Reload your infobox.~~
  - Done. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:50, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
- If he's a clone trooper, mentioning that he's a Human male is quite redundant here. And if he's a clone commando, it would be the same. I believe in this intro/bio paragrah, you can mention that he's was only a clone commando, and avoid mentioning the term clone trooper for consistency.
  - If I may interrupt for a second, I disagree about the part of Human male. If Jango's sex and species is mentioned, I won't mind so much. But if someone comes to Wookieepedia not knowing a thing about Star Wars and they read this article, they are going to wonder what species and gender this guy is. If they haven't seen Star Wars, chances are they won't know that he is a male Human just because we say that he was a clone. There are clones of female Rodians in Star Wars continuity somewhere, I'm sure. So, I say we should leave the part about Human male in there for consistency and for comprehensiveness of the article.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:09, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
    - Cal, I'm sure you know what occurs outside the CAN. It's redundant to mention Human male for clone troopers when all are Human male. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:08, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
      - I realize that, but I still stand that it should be included. However, since this isn't even my article, I'll leave it up to what you and Lee think.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 17:11, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
        I removed the info. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:27, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
    - Please take a look at my reply on your talk page. The second part of your objection is fixed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
      - Lee, I see nothing that says you have to include that information, likewise there's nothing about you cannot include it. However, per the numerous clone articles we have, stating clone trooper, or in this case, clone commando is sufficient enough. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:08, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Is there any reason why you're mentioning his height in the can-approved intro? Creating a section wouldn't be too much for this. Also, for the nickname in the intro, his nickname is Tam, not "Tam" (notice the quotation marks). Keep the punctuation out of the wiki bold formatting. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:39, November 13, 2011 (UTC)
  - Please take a look at my reply on your talk page. The second part of your objection is fixed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:47, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
    - Is it correct that you ask me to create a P&T section only for his height? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:27, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
      - Yes, that's fine, though it's optional and up to you. I'll go ahead and strike this objection. Please be careful with the quotation markings for the nickname in the intro, as well as piplinking. JangFett ^(Talk) 18:35, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

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