Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Talzzi

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Talzzi

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 16:59, October 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another lang nom

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Cevan (talk) 23:16, October 29, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:45, November 17, 2015 (UTC)
  3. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 02:01, November 19, 2015 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 01:08, January 3, 2016 (UTC)
  5. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 10:14, January 16, 2016 (UTC)
  6. ECvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 00:43, January 20, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • Could you mention that the peace talks take place during the Clone Wars so that there's a time frame? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:16, October 23, 2015 (UTC)
  • The speakers are currently infobox exclusive, although I don't know that Muftak should be included since we can't be sure what language he's speaking in ANH. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:16, October 23, 2015 (UTC)
    • I don't think that it detracts from the article to exclude the name of every named Talz who spoke the language from the main body of text. Also, do we have any reason to believe the Muftak wasn't speaking Talzzi? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 14:17, October 26, 2015 (UTC)
      • I have no personal issue on them not being included, but I thought the policy was that, at least in such small numbers, that they had to be. We don't have any reason to believe he isn't speaking Talzzi, but we also don't have any reason to believe he isn't speaking Huttese, Bocce or any other language. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:26, October 26, 2015 (UTC)
        • Maybe we can get a third opinion on this. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:18, November 3, 2015 (UTC)
          • Is he heard grunting in the movie? 501st dogma(talk) 01:40, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
            • Yes, you can hear him speak. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 02:19, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
              • I'm not sure if you can assume that he is speaking Talzzi based on the fact that he is grunting and is a Talz. There could be other languages that the Talz are able to grunt/speak. 501st dogma(talk) 02:28, November 12, 2015 (UTC)
                • In the interest of accuracy, I have relented and made the changes. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 19:53, November 17, 2015 (UTC)
Cevan
  • Language can be linked to in the opening. "The Complete Season One" in the behind the scenes and sources section should not be italicized (it should read "Star Wars: The Clone Wars: The Complete Season One"). You also have the entire Episode IV title italicized in the references, when it should only be "Star Wars" and "A New Hope." Finally, the periods and commas next to "Trespass" in the behind the scenes section should go within the quotation marks. Cevan (talk) 21:58, October 29, 2015 (UTC)
    • Done. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:29, October 29, 2015 (UTC)
      • Just one other thing I think you missed (I don't blame you for missing this; I accidentally left out a word in my initial request): you have the entire title for Episode IV italicized in your reference for it (the first time its used is next to "Talz" in the infobox), when only "Star Wars" and "A New Hope" should be italicized. Cevan (talk) 22:34, October 29, 2015 (UTC)
Imperators II
  • I do believe you should add the infobox-exclusive speakers to the article body per WP:LG. Imperators II(Talk) 01:48, January 1, 2016 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Even if we can't confirm that Muftak is speaking Talzzi in Episode IV, I believe that the BTS should note it and explain that no canon source has confirmed what language he was speaking.
  • Out of curiosity, how is Talzzi featured in Slaves of the Republic? I don't see any reference to this in the article.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 17:21, January 3, 2016 (UTC)
    • It was a few Talz slaves cowering in fear, but not really speaking. I've removed the appearance. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:12, January 15, 2016 (UTC)
Jorrel

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