Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Talsma

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Talsma

• Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 21:29, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. I shouldn't review at midnight :P Samonic 12:59, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:12, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 19:44, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:41, 3 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• Missing link to starship. Samonic 21:41, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Drat. I made a note to fix that, but forgot. Done. Dentface (talk) 21:55, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
• You source Talsma's appearance to the date note. Please fix this.
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 00:00, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
• You have a duplicate link. Samonic 22:20, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 00:00, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
• Can you introduce some variation? You refer to Talsma as Talsma every time you mention her. You can change her name with "the captain," for example. Samonic 09:08, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Dentface (talk) 19:51, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
• Let me know if there's something wrong with my Copy-edit. Samonic 21:53, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Looks good, minus one small grammatical adjustment that I've made. :) Dentface (talk) 04:17, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
    • I'm glad I only missed that while editing at midnight :P Samonic 12:58, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• That speech bubble shows that there is a quote that can be added here. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:29, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Great catch. Done. Dentface (talk) 03:21, 3 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:41, 3 September 2022 (UTC)