Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tallus

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Tallus

• Nominated by: Cwedin^(talk) 00:51, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: He shoulda tried using vinegar

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Cool, a Fallen Order nomination. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:20, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
2. Nice!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:36, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 01:30, February 26, 2020 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 19:41, February 27, 2020 (UTC)
5. Zed42 (talk) 19:41, February 29, 2020 (UTC)
6. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:45, March 2, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• In the BtS: "can be mentioned" Is this piece of ambient dialogue only triggerable by some specific player action?
  • AFAIK, it's randomly triggered.
• "on the Kashyyyk maps" I think this can just be cut down to Kashyyyk. Fan26 (Talk) 16:01, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. - Cwedin^(talk) 16:05, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
• If the NPCs who mention him really can only be stormtroopers or scout troopers, then I think it's safe for the body to at least identify the troopers as members of the Stormtrooper Corps, since it seems to be too unclear who said what for the body to specifically describe them as scout or stormtroopers. Fan26 (Talk) 00:04, February 25, 2020 (UTC)
  • And done. - Cwedin^(talk) 01:32, February 25, 2020 (UTC)

Vitus

• I think it should be added in the final sentence that they grumbled on while Cal Kestis was there and was during the events of the story.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:52, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
  • How's it look now? - Cwedin^(talk) 23:32, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
    • Just needs a link to Occupation of Kashyyyk!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:34, February 24, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done. - Cwedin^(talk) 23:36, February 24, 2020 (UTC)

Anil

• Is there a particular reason why you preferred to use "around 14 BBY" instead of "in 14 BBY"? I though both the game itself and its marketing material said the game takes place five years after the Clone Wars/Revenge of the Sith without using vague terms like "around" or "about."
  • In the game, the date comes from this dialogue:

    "This heap's been here for, what, four years?"; "[No.] Five."

  Not too reliable. Plus, the marketing material—which I don't put much canonical stock into—still leaves plenty of wiggle room. For example, if ROTS were set in late 19 BBY, and JFO begins exactly five years later, then a good chunk of the game could be set in early 13 BBY. Until something explicitly states that the game is set in 14 BBY, I believe it's best to remain vague.

• Fair enough. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:45, March 2, 2020 (UTC)

• Does the game provide subtitles for the troopers' conversation? If not, I believe {{Conjecturespell}} should be added. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:48, March 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • The entire conversation is subtitled. - Cwedin^(talk) 03:37, March 2, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:45, March 2, 2020 (UTC)