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Tala 1
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:36, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
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- Erebus Chronus (Talk) 04:44, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:32, 7 April 2022 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 23:42, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
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09:25, 9 April 2022 (UTC) - Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:02, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
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"As with all of its class"—can you add something in here eg "As with all other starships/starfighters of its class" or "Similar to all all other Z-95 headhunters" as you're not being clear what the class is about Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:53, 9 April 2022 (UTC)- Reworded.
Not sure what "With the Z-95t Headhunter model being a variant of the Z-95 Headhunter,[5] Tala 1 was individually a heavily modified Z-95 Headhunter" is saying: is the ship heavily modified BECAUSE it's a Z-95t or IN ADDITION TO being a Z-95t? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:53, 9 April 2022 (UTC)- So the Databank says that Z-95t Headhunters are a variant that featured a class 3 hyperdrive, and increased maneuverability. The Tala 1 card says that individual ship is a heavily modified Z-95. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:41, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
- Changed wording to hopefully make it more obvious. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:44, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
- So the Databank says that Z-95t Headhunters are a variant that featured a class 3 hyperdrive, and increased maneuverability. The Tala 1 card says that individual ship is a heavily modified Z-95. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:41, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:03, 10 April 2022 (UTC)