Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Subjugator (Star Destroyer)

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Subjugator (Star Destroyer)

• Nominated by: Tommy Macaroni 18:15, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. --Ohanaka Gang Member/Riverdale Chauffeur ^{(Wanna Discuss Something?)} 20:55, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
2. Great work--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:11, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
3. I honestly might have assumed this was the Star Destroyer. Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:47, July 12, 2018 (UTC)
4. <-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 17:39, July 17, 2018 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:56, July 28, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Riverdale

• Very minor, but:
• "It was in service in the Galactic Civil War, in the aftermath of the Battle of Endor in 4 ABY, Star Wars: Galactic Atlas dates the Battle of Endor to 4 ABY." Note: References are removed.
• In this sentence, I think four "ins" are quite a lot. There is also one in the previous sentence. Perhaps you could change two to different words, such as "during?" --Ohanaka Gang Member/Riverdale Chauffeur ^{(Wanna Discuss Something?)} 20:49, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • How's that? Tommy Macaroni 20:53, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
    • Great! --Ohanaka Gang Member/Riverdale Chauffeur ^{(Wanna Discuss Something?)} 20:55, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
      • Thanks for reviewing. Tommy Macaroni 21:10, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
        • No problem! --Ohanaka Gang Member/Riverdale Chauffeur ^{(Wanna Discuss Something?)} 21:16, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

Vitus

• I think the intro could be slightly reworded to something similar to "The Subjugator was a starship in the Imperial Navy during the Galactic Civil War. It was in service in the aftermath of the Battle of Endor…" that way the article doesn't start off with a really short sentence.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:06, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks for your review. Tommy Macaroni 21:10, July 9, 2018 (UTC)

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