Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Starhawk-class Battleship Mark II

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Starhawk-class Battleship Mark II

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:35, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 01:37, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 205 words (0 introduction, 148 body, 57 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:51, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
2. Loqiical (talk) 11:12, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
3. Fleet junkies! UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:13, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
4. AmazinglyCool (talk) 00:24, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 01:36, 11 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Loqiical

• I forgot to get back to this but I believe we can't use the artist's caption Hosnian Prime Fleet Parade so that information is not considered canon Loqiical (talk) 03:44, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Would it still be useful to put that information in the BTS? AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:36, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Yes I think the title/creator of the artwork can go there Loqiical (talk) 01:35, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
      • I was more so referring to what the author said in the tweet. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:06, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
        • The quote? I think that it is still non-canon. Loqiical (talk) 04:56, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
          • What I'm saying is that Vitus could write something in the BTS stating the information in the cited quote. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:40, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
  • We've been using it in BTS sections, for example in the Rakehell article. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:44, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Yes, I thought that the mention of Hosnian Prime in the body was mistaken but comparing images of the planet, it seems that the planet being depicted here is just a reused image of Hosnian Prime. Loqiical (talk) 08:29, 24 April 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• I'd like the bts to make clear that this subject was created for the Armada expansion, otherwise it reads like it was created for the article and just happened to get a mention in the expansion later on. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:50, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Reworded --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:42, 26 April 2023 (UTC)

Uber

• Seems the source in the ref is not listed on the prototype's page, and I don't believe the Mark I name is used there either.
  • Which ref? --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:43, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Ref 4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:16, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
      • Added source for prototype Starhawk, and Life Debt calls it the Nadiri Mark One Starhawk --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:49, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
• Identical consecutive refs in the second paragraph.
  • Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:43, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
• I think Hosnian Prime can be duck-tested in the image, but let me know what you think.
  • I think that the article already says Hosnian Prime through ducktest. Loqiical (talk) 06:49, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
    • I see it now, but it currently lacks context. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:55, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
      • Added context --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:43, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
• A Mediacat is in order. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:23, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:43, 4 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Can you confirm that there is indeed a hangar? Thanks Loqiical (talk) 08:29, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Added a note --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:45, 26 April 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:37, 11 May 2023 (UTC)