Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Star Destroyer (song) (second nomination)

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Contents

  • 1 Star Destroyer (song)
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Ayrehead
        • 1.1.2.2 Tommy
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Star Destroyer (song)

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:53, September 17, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Let the floodgates (re)open.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 16:17, September 18, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 18:54, September 19, 2018 (UTC)
  3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 18:32, September 27, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 21:34, September 29, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • Saying it was the latest release for a whole four year period doesn't really make sense. We know the book is set at a point during those four years, and we know at the point the book is set that it was the latest release, but since we don't know precisely when in those years it is set we don't know what occurred afterwards. You'd probably need to say that it was the newest release at "one point" between the years. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:24, September 17, 2018 (UTC)
    • How's it look now? QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 13:52, September 17, 2018 (UTC)
Tommy
  • I'm really not a fan of having three one-sentence long paragraphs. Could you put them together. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 16:13, September 17, 2018 (UTC)
    • Does it look better now? I feel like at least one paragraph break is necessary since the image is squeezing the text against the infobox, making it look like a big block. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 20:48, September 17, 2018 (UTC)
      • I honestly think making the image much smaller and putting it in the BTS or removing it entirely are the only options that are going to work. Really no part of an image should ever be level with the infobox. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:19, September 17, 2018 (UTC)
        • I don't think that putting the image in the Bts would make much sense, so I think removing it is indeed the best approach. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 05:59, September 18, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

  • So, actually, Totally Patriotic wasn't their latest release, Artistic Integrity was. So I've now removed that part. Apologies for derping out. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 06:56, September 19, 2018 (UTC)