Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sonic Servodriver

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Sonic Servodriver

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 20:44, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Word count might be a tadge over, but I think I've got everything I can into the article. Tried to get word from Reaves or Perry for a comment, but to no avail.

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Support

  1. Satisfying the listed objections will do it. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 01:25, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
  2. As long as you deal with my former Clone Wars objection that EJ has brought back to life. Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 20:01, August 31, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. Sonic the Servodriver
    • Context for the Clone Wars.
      • Still remains.
        • Heck, since the Clone Wars had nothing to do with the article, I'll withdraw this objection. 501st dogma(talk) 12:26, August 31, 2012 (UTC)
    • As you sourced the body, could you source the infobox?
      • Completely source the infobox please, the affiliation part needs to be done. Also, only use <ref name="MS2">''[[MedStar II: Jedi Healer]]''</ref> for the first reference. After that, use <ref name="MS2" />. Another thing, reffs in the infobox should have {{Ref| }} around them, like this {{Ref|<ref name="MS2">''[[MedStar II: Jedi Healer]]''</ref>}}. 501st dogma(talk) 21:24, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
    • Otherwise, fine work. The word count's not nearly 250, so you're good there. 501st dogma(talk) 21:00, August 22, 2012 (UTC)

2012 (UTC)

  1. Exiled Jedi
    • You should mention where the drink was served, was it the Rimsoo Seven cantina? Please also put the cantina that served the drink in the affiliation field.
      • You need to source every field of the infobox.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:40, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
        • I didn't see this objection before removing that from the infobox. How could we say that the drink was affiliated with the cantina if it's not stated or implied to be an exclusive beverage? NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 01:25, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
          • I see your point, I'll remove the affiliation from the infobox.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:31, August 31, 2012 (UTC)
    • You'll need to find a source for the Doctor Who and Hitchhikers part of the BTS. Note that Wikipedia is not a source. Also, you will need to source the Star Wars part to MedStar II.
    • Source the era field of the infobox.
    • The found field for the infobox should have Drongar in it.
    • I wouldn't worry about going over the word limit, you're only at 132 words currently.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:00, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
    • Oh, and you should add {{1st}} to MedStar II in the appearance list.
    • Could you also provide the year of publication for the novel in the BTS?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:01, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
    • I think that the context on the Clone Wars is necessary for this article, since it is a time the drink was produced and consumed.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:31, August 31, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

  • Done, Dogma. OtterSurf (talk) 21:17, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
  • EJ, done all I can. The only real problem is the sourcing for the DW/HHGTG reference! I may just have to drop it. OtterSurf (talk) 17:07, August 23, 2012 (UTC)
  • Didn't you say one of the authors told you that the other wrote the scene in question? That would be something you could add. Publish a screenshot. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 09:54, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
  • Sourcing is done, formatting and all. OtterSurf (talk) 20:02, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
    • You still need to source the HHGTTG line. Do you know how to use MLA format? NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 00:52, August 31, 2012 (UTC)
  • Got the screenshot of the email from Perry. Looks like that'll be all. OtterSurf (talk) 20:22, August 30, 2012 (UTC)