Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sonic Screwdriver

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Sonic Screwdriver

  • Nominated by: NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 21:16, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
Tennant: "Need this?"
Davison: "Nah, I'm fine."
Tennant: "Oh no, of course, you went mostly hands-free, didn't you? Like hey, I'm the Doctor, I can save the universe using a kettle and some string and look at me, I'm wearing a vegetable."
―Tennant offers Davison a Sonic Screwdriver.[src]

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Looks good to go to me. It's got all the info it's likely ever to have and reads really well, giving the reader a good slant on the subject. OtterSurf (talk) 21:55, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Sonic the Screwdriver 501st dogma(talk) 11:29, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 16:49, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Menkooroo (talk) 21:03, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. How bou' use Allston's twitter tweet as the BTS quote why not? Menkooroo (talk) 21:29, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
    • I had thought about it and figured it would seem out of context, but, looking again, I don't think it's so bad now. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 21:47, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
  2. One thing. The info box says "Found on: Across the galaxy". Is there anything you can do to make it fit better? 501st dogma(talk) 22:14, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
    • Not that I can see. I'm not writing it as "the galactic disc." Really, it's not "on" that either. It's in it. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 23:15, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Exiled Jedi
    • Since the article's subject is from a Fate of the Jedi novel I assume that it is from the Legacy era, but in the article you show in the era tags and infobox that it happened in the Rise of the Empire era. In any event, I think you should mention the timeframe in the body of the article.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 17:25, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
      • Wups. An artifact from when it was merged with the Servodriver. Fixed. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 19:06, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
  4. One more: The body calls the droid a service droid but the quote attribution has it as a protocol droid. Menkooroo (talk) 13:24, July 29, 2012 (UTC)
    • Fixed. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 20:42, July 29, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

  • By the way, WP:LE. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:20, July 23, 2012 (UTC)