Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Solha's family

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Solha's family

• Nominated by: Samonic ^(Talk) 15:07, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Companion piece to my featured article nomination, Duke Solha.
• WookieeProject (optional): Novels and Durge's Lance

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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:08, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:05, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:36, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 15:19, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• Sounds like Confederacy military or Separatist Droid Army could be linked and included in the affliations
• There's enough members of this family to justify its own category Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:09, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Sure. (both done; I didn't mention the "Confederacy" because that's not what the book uses) Samonic ^(Talk) 08:33, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• "Inside the factory, Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker told Chiss Ascendancy Senior Captain Mitth'raw'nuruodo that the Republic Senator Padmé Amidala, his wife, said the family was very ambitious." Too much detail imo, I'd rather it'd be simplified to only say that Padme told Anakin that the family was ambitious. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 17:33, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Let me know if that works. Samonic ^(Talk) 17:43, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• Since Serennian is the demonym of Serenno, can you move that after the mention of the planet itself? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:12, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Edited. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:51, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the liberty to make a tweak, I think I made it a bit smoother. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:43, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
• Can Mokivj be added to the infobox's other locations? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:12, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
  • As you wish. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:51, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
• The article indicates Solha worked for the Republic then the Separatists, but it seems like the family, under Solha's direction, chose to secede. It would be worth noting he felt the republic thought he was a joke. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:12, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Solha seceded. His siblings were at Mokivj, we don't know if the other two were even affiliated with the GR. I'm not going to add "their secession" because of that. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:51, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
• If we're noting Padme telling Anakin, we can also note that Anakin told Thrawn. HOWEVER, I think it's probably better to rephrase this and say that Padme felt the entire family was ambitious, unless there's additional evidence to objectively say they're ambitious. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:12, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
  • I was told to remove the mention of Anakin telling Thrawn by other reviewers. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:51, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
    • Done. Samonic ^(Talk) 08:13, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
• Looking at the other articles, this needs to be expanded to include: 1)The family was known by Dooku, Amidala and other high-level political figures in the Republic 2) The droid factory was a secret and the family plotted to keep it that way. 3) ANYTHING about the family's defeat, that should be a given
  • TBH it is already implied that Amidala knew the family; I don't really agree with including Dooku. Yes, the defeat is a given, I removed it accidentaly, sorry. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:51, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
    • All good :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:43, 22 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:19, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

• Please note the following. As I said on the FAN, we don't know in what capacity Duke Solha served the Republic. Samonic ^(Talk) 08:32, 3 October 2022 (UTC)