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Slime-gnome

Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:53, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Is this the real Yoda's species?
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Support

As a reluctant slime expert. Immi Thrax (talk) 15:17, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
Grogu da slime-gnome Fan26 (Talk) 19:39, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
Dentface (talk) 03:10, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:38, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:28, 16 September 2021 (UTC)

Object

Slimmi Thrax

I suggest rephrasing "the son of the count of Serenno Gora" because it can be misread as the count of a place called Serenno Gora, which will likely have a domino effect on that sentence, because of the next suggestion... Immi Thrax (talk) 05:09, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
... the title "the Count of Serenno" is capitalized throughout the script book, so perhaps in capitalizing it, you might revise to "Gora, the Count of Serenno." As noted above, this may lead to some additional reworking so it doesn't become too much of a comma-fest. Immi Thrax (talk) 05:09, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
- Both done, thanks. Regarding your addition of slime to the second mention of slime-gnome, I think it isn't accurate since we avoid linking single words in terms that are articles themselves. I mean, since slime-gnome is an article, I think that we shouldn't link slime-gnome. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:03, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
  - ~~You're welcome! Would it be all right with you if I suggest specific options for rewording to address the series of commas? I'll DM you if so.~~ Immi Thrax (talk) 07:30, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
Please include a bit more context on Yoda beyond being a Grand Master (of what?). If it's not too speculative, some details of Yoda's appearance would help convey why he'd be compared to a slime gnome—for instance, height relative to a human. Let me know if that seems too speculative. Immi Thrax (talk) 05:09, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
- Added Jedi. Since we don't know what of Yoda looked like a slime-gnome, describing his physical appearance would be too much of speculation, in my opinion. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:03, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
  - ~~Understood! There's a further bit of the exchange that I consider relevant, immediately in response:~~
    ~~JENZA: Shush. He'll hear you.~~
    
    ~~RAMIL: I'm not surprised with ears like that.~~
    - How's that? —Unsigned comment by LucaRoR (talk • contribs)

UberSoldat

~~Saying Jenza found the comment offensive when she only told Ramil to quiet down after hearing the comment feels very speculative.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:49, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
- Better? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:24, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
  - I'm referring to the fact that you are drawing a speculative conclusion from the response of the character. Telling a person to quiet down does not really convey a sense of "feeling offended" or such, only a concern of being heard in this context. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:45, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
    - Makes sense, truncated. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:29, 15 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:28, 16 September 2021 (UTC)