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Skylar-bird
- Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 20:17, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 23:44, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 100 words (0 introduction, 58 body, 42 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 87 words (0 introduction, 45 body, 42 behind the scenes)
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Support
Qualifies for WP:NOVELS and WP:GE as well if you feel like.—spookywillowwtalk 02:24, 8 April 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 04:07, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
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Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:29, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
Object
spookly
Are they specifically noted to be native to Batuu? If they're only shown being present on/living there, then the infobox field shouldn't be filled. Or, if they introcued as native to Batuu, a link to homeworld needs to be introduced in the body.- Seems like habitat being "Wilds" would suit in this circumstance.
- With a bit of rearranging, I think it should be a bit clearer that Nitani was reaching out with the Force and sensing life as if it was in color (so, just a touch more detail than only sensed, especially since she's not hearing it from close by).
- Just a general thing per status precedent for these types of pages but we'd normally start the first sentence with "were a type of bird" and leave the species link out, for conciseness.
Missing Category:Species of undefined sentience and Category:Creatures of unspecified diet.—spookywillowwtalk 21:38, 7 April 2024 (UTC)- For the habitat, there's no page for wilds. Should I make one to link to or just not have a link? There's also Batuu Wilds, but I think that's a specific location. CometSmudge (talk) 23:04, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
- No link needed in this case, as it's vague enough, just the word will do fine —spookywillowwtalk 23:07, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
- I think I fixed everything-CometSmudge (talk) 02:23, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- No link needed in this case, as it's vague enough, just the word will do fine —spookywillowwtalk 23:07, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
- For the habitat, there's no page for wilds. Should I make one to link to or just not have a link? There's also Batuu Wilds, but I think that's a specific location. CometSmudge (talk) 23:04, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:33, 9 April 2024 (UTC)