Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Skua Squad's botched mission

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Skua Squad's botched mission

• Nominated by: CT-1742 (talk) 17:10, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 03:07, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 102 words (0 introduction, 64 body, 38 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 107 words (0 introduction, 69 body, 38 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 17:09, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 18:40, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
3. AnilSerifoglu (talk) 03:06, 15 June 2024 (UTC)

Object

Editor

• The source establishes this was an "early" mission of the war, which should be reflected in the text and can also narrow down date note to circa 22 bby. Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:02, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Would something like that work better? CT-1742 (talk) 20:41, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
    • I would include "around 22 BBY" after "Independent Systems" in that sentence Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:47, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
      • Fixed. CT-1742 (talk) 20:54, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• Per the layout guide 'The "prev", "conc", and "next" fields of event infoboxes shall only be used for events that are relevant to the article's subject and are mentioned in the article's text.' So you'll need to mention it in the body or remove them from the fields Lewisr (talk) 05:18, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Fixed. CT-1742 (talk) 16:29, 6 June 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:06, 15 June 2024 (UTC)