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Sixty-Eighth Infantry
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:32, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
—spookywillowwtalk 19:59, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 20:09, April 15, 2020 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 20:12, April 15, 2020 (UTC)
Zed42 (talk) 23:30, April 16, 2020 (UTC)- --Vitus InfinitusTalk 23:36, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 14:28, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
Can you provide more info for these "battle groups"?UberSoldat93(talk) 13:56, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
- I need to stop assuming they're all battle groups. Changed it. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 14:21, April 12, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
If the Mid Rim Retreat is the "coordinated distraction" mentioned in the body, it should be linked, and if not it needs to be mentioned.Zed42 (talk) 20:35, April 13, 2020 (UTC)- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:43, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
Spooky
Fisheye is mentioned one time that doesn't seem to be talked of, "I'll check with the captain about Fisheye. I'm meeting with Howl in an hour, and I'm sure he'll be happy to share" a few paragraphs after Namir getting filled in; which then means that Howl had been receiving news of Fisheye and knows their news. Imo that should be slid in there at least slightly, instead of ending the article with "filled him in", perhaps.—spookywillowwtalk 00:26, April 14, 2020 (UTC)- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 08:43, April 14, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:28, April 17, 2020 (UTC)