Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sith starship replicas

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Sith starship replicas

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Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:14, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:37, 31 March 2022 (UTC)
Remaining objections resolved via Discord Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:50, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:11, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:59, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 18:05, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

~~Considering the Cursid totemic figures have the same purpose as the starships (according to their article), I think such info should be included as context for them.~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 00:48, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done, thanks.— Samonic (Talk) 10:58, 26 March 2022 (UTC)

~~Unless Kursid has only one arid plateau, we shouldn't say "the planet's arid plateau..." Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:22, 27 March 2022 (UTC)~~
- Resolved via discord Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 20:51, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
~~Should mention that Kursid is an outer rim planet Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:22, 27 March 2022 (UTC)~~
~~Article name is "Sith starship replicas" but the article uses "Sith ships replicas", including the infobox. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:22, 27 March 2022 (UTC)~~
~~Need to note that the 1stm is simultaneous with the audiobook Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:22, 27 March 2022 (UTC)~~
- There is only one plateau we know of. Everything done.— Samonic (Talk) 20:49, 27 March 2022 (UTC)

~~I'd like to see starship linked somewhere~~
~~The conjecturally titled articles shouldn't have their titles used completely in the body, and the same should be done in the location field in the infobox just to avoid repetition~~
- ~~Still needs to be done with the Kursid Sith Cult in the body~~
~~Since we know that Tenebrous's apprenticeship finished in 167 BBY that date can be included in the body.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:08, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
- All done.— Samonic 07:37, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
  - Turns out dating anything relating to Plagueis is much more complicated than I realized. The novel doesn't actually state that Tenebrous killed his master 100 years before 67 BBY, I've added a convoluted reference note to Darth Tenebrous's Sith Master which you can adapt for this one.
    - 124 BBY should also be used in the body. With that I think the first sentence can also be broken up so that the date information is its own sentence. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:06, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
      - Taken care of.— Samonic 09:26, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
~~The bolding in the intro definitely shouldn't be broken up. Even just bolding the word "replicas" will be fine~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:38, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
- All done, now.— Samonic 10:17, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

The article states that Tenebrous was an apprentice a century prior to 67 BBY and that the replicas had been constructed prior to him becoming a Sith Master. So why couldn't it have happened prior to c. 167 BBY? Imperators II^(Talk) 07:51, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
- Done. (If I understood correctly)— Samonic 20:00, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
  - For some reason you're still assuming that Tenebrous couldn't have visited Kursid prior to 167 BBY. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:53, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
    - Taken care of.— Samonic 11:45, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

Here is the mention of the subject: "At some point previous to Darth Tenebrous’s visit as an apprentice, replicas of the Sith ships had been constructed in the center of the arid plateau that served as a battleground, and enormous totemic figures—visible only from abovehad been outlined by removing tens of thousands of fist-sized volcanic stones that covered the ground" Samonic (Talk) 12:20, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:05, 9 April 2022 (UTC)