Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Silver (clone trooper)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Silver (clone trooper)

Nominated by: ~~~~CommanderDeviss327
Nomination comments: All information on Silver is in the article. There is not enough information for it to be any more than a comprehensive article.

The last sentence is a run-on and is structured incorrectly.
Date reference is needed for 21 BBY.
I think Clone Captain is more suitable, rather than clone trooper captain.
His equipment such as his uniform can be expanded upon as well as some more context on his skills and if possible, his personality.
A behind the scenes section is needed, which includes context on his first appearance as well as where he was identified.
First sentence is a truncated sentence, as is the third sentence.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:59, February 21, 2020 (UTC)

The article is missing a Behind the scenes section. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:06, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
- The section's title is capitalized incorrectly. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:09, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
The article has infobox-exclusive information. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:06, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
BTS needs to be referenced. Imperators II^(Talk)
BTS contains a redirect. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:09, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
Release date for the episode should be added to the BTS. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:09, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
Please take a look at how character articles should be structured. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:16, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
The episode itself doesn't provide information such as its number in the season, therefore that info cannot be referenced to the episode. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:17, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
Ref 1 needs to be turned into a manual reference note that explains how the information presented in the Databank entry applies to Silver. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:18, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
The character's name is presented inconsistently between infobox and article's body. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:19, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
As the article is currently over 165 words, an intro must be provided. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:40, February 21, 2020 (UTC)

In the Personality and Traits, you can link to "Meter", "Color", "Hair", "Eye", "Sexes" (pipelinked through "He"), and "Clothing". Fan26 (Talk) 20:14, February 21, 2020 (UTC)

I believe this falls under the "nonsense nominations" clause of the EC Bylaws page. It is clear this nomination is well under the standards of a CA, and the nominator clearly has not been bothered to look at the nominating rules, other CAs, or indeed the article itself themselves before nominating. Nor have they been responding to objections on this page, suggesting a severe lack of familiarity with this process. It is not the job of reviewers to object to such basic things. I recommend the nominator reads the CAN rules and other CAs, and familiarises themselves with this process before nominating another article. Tommy Macaroni 21:58, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 22:00, February 21, 2020 (UTC)
—spookywilloww^talk 22:01, February 21, 2020 (UTC)