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Sidn-ee
- Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 04:30, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Trying to see if I can still nominate correctly
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Support
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:37, 10 October 2022 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 17:50, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 18:53, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
Object
Fan
"despite their efforts, the siblings were unsuccessful in keeping them from extricating themselves." This bit ought to be reworded so it's clear they couldn't prevent the escape of the Core Ships. As it's written rn one could be forgiven for thinking the Jedi were trying to prevent their own escape and failed in that. :PFan26 (Talk) 22:14, 6 October 2022 (UTC)- There. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 21:55, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
Imp
As the rest of the article doesn't indicate that we know Sidn-ee's gender, I'm assuming the use of "her" in the lead sentence is in error?Imperators II(Talk) 12:32, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:54, 17 October 2022 (UTC)