Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Shu Yen

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Shu Yen

  • Nominated by: Outer Shell Electrons (talk) 15:08, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 05:54, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 194 words (0 introduction, 124 body, 70 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 125 words (0 introduction, 81 body, 44 behind the scenes)
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(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. CometSmudge (talk) 18:24, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 22:08, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 04:04, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
  4. Sanathestarr (talk) 16:10, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:15, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comet
  • I don't think there's enough room for the image. It goes all the way into the appearances, so I think it would be better if you removed it.
    • Image removed.
  • Shen Yu's pronouns aren't citable to his lightsaber's card
    • Fixed!
  • FantasyFlightGamesLogo The Veteran and the Exile on Fantasy Flight Games' official website (backup link) appears to have an indirect mention, which would also be his first mention. It also says he's "long dead", so you could slightly change the the article to reflect that. CometSmudge (talk) 16:28, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Adjusted appearances accordingly and acknowledged the "long dead" part.
  • Art of movement isn't necessary for the BTS anymore, since it's no longer a simultaneous first mention
    • Removed it.
  • The article is considered a source, not an appearance CometSmudge (talk) 17:29, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed.
  • For the death date, you should add that the article says his death is long before the game's events to the date note, so that way you only need one reference in the infobox (And in the sentence mentioning his death). CometSmudge (talk) 17:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Yavin 4 should also be added to the date note
    • Added!
  • Darth Vader should have context CometSmudge (talk) 18:31, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Context added.
Lew
  • Diala could use a tiny bit of context Lewisr (talk) 20:28, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Added a speckle of context.
spookly
  • Seemingly due to a good amount of articles starting with "Shu-" and Shu Mai; a {{Disambig}} would be warranted. A search of "Yen" brings up a decent bit too; probably worth doing for both.—spookywillowwtalk 01:26, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Done and done!

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:15, 16 July 2024 (UTC)


  • Not an objection but just a cursory note, may want to sign your comments when replying to objections in future noms. Bot gets confused pretty easily sometimes without signatures as it looks for the timestamps to see when stuff is overdue.—spookywillowwtalk 04:04, 13 July 2024 (UTC)