Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Separatist holdout (PM-6986)

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Separatist holdout (PM-6986)

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus Open frequency 05:48, July 23, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Welcome to the CAN! UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:18, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
2. Good work. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 09:17, August 6, 2020 (UTC)
3. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:51, August 6, 2020 (UTC)
4. --Lewisr (talk) 16:55, August 17, 2020 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 04:36, August 18, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Braha'tok enthusiast

• Per here and the subsequent precedent (Oppressor), you don't need to list the authors. As seen in the article from the nomination, you can just say the sourcebook is by Fantasy Flight Games. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 08:40, July 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Erebus Chronus Open frequency 16:18, July 23, 2020 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• The date needs a separate note, which is currently infobox-exclusive. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:01, July 23, 2020 (UTC)
  • Date note added. Erebus Chronus Open frequency 16:18, July 23, 2020 (UTC)
    • Still missing from the article body. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:18, July 24, 2020 (UTC)
      • Added to the body paragraph. Erebus Chronus Open frequency 15:55, July 24, 2020 (UTC)
        • Objection handled via Discord. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:46, July 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Per precedent, Star Wars Roleplaying should be linked somewhere in the BTS.
  • Done. Erebus Chronus Open frequency 15:38, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
    • You have to spell it out instead of pipelinking it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:42, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
      • Done. Erebus Chronus Open frequency 17:13, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Since there is no Legends counterpart for the subject, it is unnecessary to specify that the source is "canon". UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:48, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Erebus Chronus Open frequency 15:38, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

QGJ

• The first sentence is very run-on. Please split it in two. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 17:00, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Erebus Chronus Open frequency 18:05, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

OOM

• "JF-86 sought to rebuild the holdout's forces and carry out its final order: attack the Galactic Senate of the Galactic Republic despite not having a transport to leave the planetoid." Currently, the order is joined with the holdout's circumstance of not having transportation. The two clauses should be split up. - - - OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:19, August 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • How does it look now? Erebus Chronus Open frequency 20:44, August 17, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:28, August 18, 2020 (UTC)