Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Scout transmitter

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Scout transmitter

• Nominated by: RattsT (talk) 09:23, March 28, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another comic book one-off droid.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Zed42 (talk) 12:03, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:28, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 22:37, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 07:29, April 9, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Ref issue in the first sentence. Currently, it's covered by the date reference.
• Darth Vader and ZED need context. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:28, March 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. RattsT (talk) 09:33, March 28, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• You should describe what the droid looks like physically. This will allow you to mention its plating color, which is currently infobox-exclusive. Zed42 (talk) 09:57, March 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. RattsT (talk) 10:03, March 28, 2020 (UTC)
    • You could also add that the droids could produce sound in some form of basic speech. Zed42 (talk) 01:42, March 29, 2020 (UTC)
      • Added. RattsT (talk) 01:52, March 29, 2020 (UTC)
• I think events should be presented chronologically, with mention of Sabé visiting the apartment and leaving the droid behind placed before the sentences about Vader's investigation. Zed42 (talk) 02:06, March 29, 2020 (UTC)
  • Addressed. RattsT (talk) 02:50, March 29, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:29, April 9, 2020 (UTC)