Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Saylew's wife

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Saylew's wife

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 20:13, January 7, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. Winterz (talk) 01:07, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 23:37, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:02, January 13, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Article for the Flesh Raider attack. Winterz (talk) 00:13, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
    • Done.
  2. Exiled Jedi
    • The first sentence seems to be worded rather awkwardly. Could you reword it?
      • Done.
    • Context on the Cold War and Saylew.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 00:18, January 8, 2013 (UTC)
      • Done.
    • I would mention the fact greatly upset Saylew and perhaps give a short mention of Saylew's ragings to the village leaders.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 02:43, January 10, 2013 (UTC)
      • Done.
  3. 501st
    • Mention she died in his arms.
      • Done.
    • Also make clear Tython was the adopted home. 501st dogma(talk) 22:46, January 10, 2013 (UTC)

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